Trailer- Feedback Improvements(Editing)

The first improvement that we made, taken from the feedback, was to ensure that all text on screen remained the same or very similar throughout so that the continuity flowed better. We were also able to cut down the fight seen, as being so long in the first cut, it took away some excitement and tension that we would have liked the trailers disruption in the middle to have.

The first two screenshots above, show the text that we will now be using throughout to make sure that all the clips look similar, and therefore keep the continuity. We also added a filter to the shot of the four actors walking away, as black and white makes in look darker, upholding the genre conventions. 

After the feedback we were given; we decided to swap software from Serif Movie to IMovie. This is due to the fact that IMovie has a wider range of editing features, which will allow us to create a more professional looking trailer, due to more transitions, and more text features.