Trailer- First Draft Feedback

Hitting the halfway mark in our coursework, we showed our peers what we had produced so far so that we could get some feedback on what is good and what needs improving.

First off all, we were told that our non-diegetic asynchronous sound and lighting used fit very well with our piece; it helped to emphasise the genre and to create tension. We also used a proficient variety of shots to connote different feelings and emotions. The mise en scene used was excellent, props were placed appropriately and the overall trailer was given a Mid Band 3(B Grade)

Points of improvement that we were given was to change some of the fonts used for text throughout so that it matched, to help the continuity flow. It was also said that we should cut down the fight scene a little as it was too long, and therefore the tension began to decrease.